wits-page4 in black'n'white

Well I finally get to relax a bit from a stressful week of school with tests and all. So I decided to move along with my very dear comic. Here is the first of the black and white pages...
It's such a dificult page to pull off... and I really don't know if I did well or not. In some ways I think it's pretty good for an experiment with the tools that are available to me in the art program I use (ie-gimp) but then I wish I had done some thing better for the background something more informative of where we are in this scene... Ah well that'll just have to wait for later.
Hope you like it. Comments and feedback like usual is much apreciated if you can tell me how to make black and white pages better.
Enjoy~


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If you are browsing my Written in the stars Gallery just click on the "forward" link above the deviation and it'll take you to the next page and of course the "back" link will take you to the previous pages.

If you aren't in the Written in the Stars gallery here is the link: [link] click ona thumbnail from where you want to start and click on the "forward" link above the deviation to proceed onto the next page, etc.

Just as a warning, if you refresh the page or go to the previous page by pressing back on you browser the handy links up top are lost... so you'll probably want to go back to the gallery.

Thank you for viewing <3 (comment if this didn't work for you or if I made no sense)


(old links :intro cover: [link]
next page: [link] )